partner input: positive supportive comments and mention to focus more on turtle. (please don't let my harsh summary distract from how imperative michelles was as a partner. I can provide email if neccesary- she was very good and supportive which is what i needed very much) my original memory box was done using windows music maker and pictures- at the last minute i understood that we really needed to be on camera. Michelle was great about giving positive and constructive feedback to both memory box performances. I left the original one in the wiki as well.
I thought this was a personal narrative so wrote accordingly. My story does not have problem, solution or climax so to speak.
characters: Me, kate, shahatra
setting: washington dc
problem: none
plot: Girl looks back and reminisces about day she got [[#|turtle figurine]], and her life since then. Ponders why keeps turtle in her possession
solution: turtle reminds of her of a good time in her youth
audio for story:
[ invalid file: Mcneary_memorybox_audio.m4a ]
ideas for video:
film in area of DC near Smithsonian (assuming weather holds) [it didn't]
Pictures of me in favorite dress (assuming my mom can find any and send them along) [no pictures]
pictures of ludlow street and baltimore avenue
maps to show locations of all the moves (maybe comic- walk turtle across the map to arkansas, then to north carolina, etc. need to get big map of atlas from library) [didn't show well in film]
video (made in window movie maker) could't find any pictures of me younger than college
Story title: The Turtle Figurine
partner: Michelle Dupuisfinal story url:
http://youtu.be/Mjw5wViX8fM
partner input: positive supportive comments and mention to focus more on turtle. (please don't let my harsh summary distract from how imperative michelles was as a partner. I can provide email if neccesary- she was very good and supportive which is what i needed very much) my original memory box was done using windows music maker and pictures- at the last minute i understood that we really needed to be on camera. Michelle was great about giving positive and constructive feedback to both memory box performances. I left the original one in the wiki as well.
partner feedback
rubric
Memorybox popplet
http://popplet.com/app/#/743476
I thought this was a personal narrative so wrote accordingly. My story does not have problem, solution or climax so to speak.
characters: Me, kate, shahatra
setting: washington dc
problem: none
plot: Girl looks back and reminisces about day she got [[#|turtle figurine]], and her life since then. Ponders why keeps turtle in her possession
solution: turtle reminds of her of a good time in her youth
audio for story:
[ invalid file: Mcneary_memorybox_audio.m4a ]
ideas for video:
film in area of DC near Smithsonian (assuming weather holds) [it didn't]
Pictures of me in favorite dress (assuming my mom can find any and send them along) [no pictures]
pictures of ludlow street and baltimore avenue
maps to show locations of all the moves (maybe comic- walk turtle across the map to arkansas, then to north carolina, etc. need to get big map of atlas from library) [didn't show well in film]
video (made in window movie maker) could't find any pictures of me younger than college
[ invalid file: memorybox_mcneary.wmv ]